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You have eyes of dark brown

Luminous, and large

And become larger still

When you are excited


It is easy for you to ask

for your heart to keep still

for it beats madly for someone

who doesn't know you.


So do not be jealous

when you get to know him

and he tells you he is smitten

by the charms of another brown-eyed girl


I know his secret thoughts

and pray, believe me, when I tell you

you are that brown eyed girl

and he wishes he knew your name.
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Another poem that no one actually reads, but not that I actually care.

Laura, Laura is a poem about a brown-eyed girl who is in love with a boy, and he tells her that he is in love with another brown-eyed girl. S

A friend asks the boy if he knows Laura, but he says he didn't, only that he is in love with a girl with luminous brown eyes. The friend tells the boy that the brown-eyed girl and Laura are one and the same.

But of course Laura doesn't know this, and is probably giving up in despair.

And no, the poem is only implying it, it doesn't actually say so.

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:iconartsyrella:
Aww.. that was so nice! Short but sweet <3
:iconfiredupmaven:
thanks. :)

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I'm the one who likes to make love on the floor
I don't want to hang up the phone yet
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